Star Ka'at's Ramblings











{May 29, 2013}   In Candle’s Fractured Light

Candle burns
Daylight wanes
Fractured light
In gloom of night

Silent cuts
Leave bloody ruts
Mental cries
Physical ties

Watch the drip
Casual slip
Darkly stains
Smoothly drains

Gazing dream
Seizing stream
Ardent fight
Desperate plight

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Emily Bay says:

Great rhyme scheme…. love the imagery, too!



Thanks! 🙂



Emily Bay says:

You’re welcome. 🙂



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