Star Ka'at's Ramblings

{February 15, 2011}   Glitterdust

Gloating laugh
Limping victim
It comes
To hunt
To haunt
Empty stomach
Raging fear
Deep breathing
Spread the dust
Take the chance


kolembo says:

Very nice, almost frantic. I tell you what… it’s sexy! So much so I read ‘dust’, as lust!
Very nice, very hip.

awesomepie says:

It is pretty frantic. Is this glitterdust something that people put up their nose? I feel like no matter what, this poem is going to be set in a dark, seedy place.

– Clint P.

Thanks to you both for the comments. 🙂

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