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{January 31, 2011}   Weep Beneath The Trees

Cold embrace
Rent my heart
Yearning, broken

Filter my tears
Open, never
Reason lost

Trip, scream
Helpless
Empty, shattered

Death, so final
Earth, so heartless
Anguish, so wracking
Take not my love
Hindered from life

Options not given
Favors not granted

Run, run
Over, stumble
Bent, agony
Inner, hollow
Never again

Herald not the dawn
Offer not food or drink
Open the earth
Defend, only a memory

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Gweny says:

This is by far one of the most emotionally evocative pieces I have ever read dealing directly with the torrent of various emotions that possess a person’s heart when facing the death of someone dearly loved. It is so vividly written, and incredibly real, no questions asked. Nice job and thank you for sharing!



Thank you so much for your kind words, and for reading.



Jingle says:

creative acrostic,
well done.
Thanks for linking,

A++



belladonna23 says:

very creative, a well written piece!!
here’s my piece if you want to read it:
http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/01/28/sonnet-vii/



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