Never, no, sinful
Crack, smack, and bleed
Fire, ice, death
Push, pull, crave
Hate, sate, and spiral
Worn, shorn, torn
Burn, spurn, turn
Stop, drop, and repent
Weep, sleep, reap
{October 2, 2010}
Never No
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The Ramblings of A. Loxley 
Superb poem.. perfect for the Potluck.. I appreciate for sharing this with us.. Loads of Wishes always.. xox
I love this…very well written…
very well done.
love the playfulness.
Very abstract and creative.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/17/champion/
Beautifully economy of words
This is so crisp and complete! Perfect, Dan.
Victoria
Sorry, Star…you’re not Dan.
lol, no worries. 🙂
Such strong images created from a great choice of words…I especially liked the denial at the beginning and then the ugliness of what was really happening.
good choice of words and great imagery.
Very creative and I love the way you played with words.
interesting..
Whoa yeah! Brevity.. impact. Great stuff. Like this one. I’ma tercet lover, so you got me there too 🙂
Cheers
Luke @ WordSalad
(mine are here –
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/10/14/abscond/
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/08/19/communication/
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/06/26/257/
I really enjoyed the flow and your way with words. Powerful emotions and actions which could be felt in the music of your words. Great poem.
Words have such impact when hooked together.
great poem! – sounds a bit like the story of my childhood… 🙂
interesting style…what a profound imagery you made of these words!
Just love how you did this…poetic stirring words…thanks for linking oxox
Creatively done, superb presentation – thanks!
This is very clever. Good job … thanks for a fine contribution to potluck.
I hope you are enjoying your visits and visitors.
Poem on …